Wednesday, May 9, 2007

'My Erotic Dream'



I don't know what love is
But i feel something so strong inside my heart
You have worked the magic
And developed this feeling from the very start

I want to see you smiling always
As your smile is a divine emotion
I want to hold your hand always
And love you with my whole devotion

You have Got the sway
To make me stay
Stay just besides you
Loving and caring you everyday

I want to hold you tight
And get everything right
Wait until i make love with you
On that perfect night

Make until you cry
Me deep inside you
A feeling that you will get
Not by the rest not even few

Me kissing your lips
And holding you in my arms
Touching your body smoothly
And destroying all your charms

I feel your sigh
You and me high
Tasting your tongue
Me wanting you more
Howsoever hard to score

You kissing my chest
Lying down and having rest
I would caress your forehead
Being besides you on the bed

Now that i can feel your mine
As i get up by you in this beautiful sunshine
I can feel so much more stronger
The dream of growing with you older.

© sagar

8 comments:

Unknown said...

u make me wonder:)

gugs said...

love is so simple and uncomplicated in your world.... :)

Unknown said...

i liked the poem....mayb this is how love should b....way 2 go

Anonymous said...

u make luv sound so uncomplicated buddy!! nice 1 dis!!
- kersi

Unknown said...

abe hindi me lihka kar samaj to ave.......

Unknown said...

love is beyond my understanding...so is ur poem...

Unknown said...

i still have long time to understand love.....but wat u have written is just superpub....its really very good....it feels very good to read dis thoughts about love....its rises some feeling in heart its very very good.....:)

Anonymous said...

good poem!!!

 
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